Charmed 9x04: Witch Slap (p1)

[Simymonna ( ADMIN )]

[glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300]CHARMED: 9x04: Witch Slap ( aka B**ch slap)[/glow][/glow]

A long time ago a young woman called Maddy was looking in to a mirror after almost being killed by demons. She is always being a not excepted by people of her classroom at school. But when she found out she was a witch and part demon.. She could not believed that it was all for real. She then had the chance to be herself.. And smile when she saw a classmate being provoked by them. They always naged her about stupid things like her hair, her way of walking, her way of talking, her look. They always provoked to do it to her.

Kayliegh: Maddy could you please be more quite. We're gonna sleep. How was your day at school anyway..

Maddy: It was fine mom..

Kayliegh: Okay well see ya tomorrow and go to bed soon. Tomorrow is gonna be a great day at the camp.

But Maddy lied.. It never went good outside the walls of her home. Even with her powers. She could not except the fact that they always teased her for some reason.


At the Manor

Everybody is gonna sleep but Paige is not tired enough to go to bed. She is a bit irritated because of Piper, Prue and Phoebe. They only do things with eachother and let her stay and look from behind. Paige does not like that. She always had fun with them and now when Prue is back. Well she still goes away to help a charge, her sisters are to much to her. When Prue is gone Phoebe and Piper go to work then very fast. And when they come back, Prue comes back to and then she is still alone.
Paige walks to the kitchen and looks at the flowers that are standing on the table.

Paige: Why is this all of the sudden only about Prue?

The next morning

Paige is already out of her bed and is sitting on the table. When Piper walks in she looks at Paige. She sees that something it wrong with her..

Piper: Paige is there something wrong?
Paige: No....

And she still looks very dissapointed to Piper.

Piper: Well you look to me like something is very wrong.

Prue then comes in and looks at Paige. She walks to her and wants to say something but then Paige stands up.

Paige: Go away you! Just leave me alone!!!!!!


And she walks out of the room. She sees Phoebe looking to her when she walks to the door. She opens the door and runs away and then orbs somewhere to the Netherlands..


Maddy looks out of the window. She thinks.. What if there was someone out there that understands her.. The way she feels. The way she thinks.. She is always alone. A only child with no brothers or sisters.. Just alone....

She takes her diary and starts to wright something down..

Dear diary..

Yesterday was terrible! My most hating day of my life! It started with that B**ch.. Anneke! She always picks on me! But what can i do?
There is nothing i can do.. because when i do the whole classroom will be there and kick me from everyside of my body and i will be back at home with blue spots everywhere and with blood like next time. I promissed my mother not to use my powers only when i absolutly need to.. So now diary you have the answere why i'm not using them! Maybe i should use them today when i go to school! And kick them! And then with everybody watching them have pain and not me! But that's not fair or is it?
I have no idea! I will wait when it's time that i will use them for always!

x0x0x0x Maddy

She puts her pen down and closed her diary and walks downstairs...

Somewhere else in her street

Paige orbs in after had looking everywhere.. for people so that she cannot reveal her secret.. She looks at the houses all away down the street. It's not a long street. All the lights are out. She sees a little light.. But then thinks of her sisters.. but then walks to the nearest Hotel.. called The flower power.

Paige: Hello i would a room please

The guy after the counter looks at her.. He looks at her boobs and within 2 minutes he's in love..

Paige: Hello have you got a room or not?
Danic: ofccoouurrsseee madddaaamm

And he looks away after him and sees a key.

Danic: Here you go!
Paige: Oh and can i call for someone here please?
Danic: ofcourse.. Who are you gonna call?
Paige: That's none of your .. oh okay well i'm gonna call my sisters boyfriend that he has to get my husband to this place!
Danic: Husband?
Paige: yes! i'm married! So now where can i call? What is the country number here?
Danic: Over there and ehm it's +31 ..
Paige: Okay thank you.........

She walks to the point where he's pointing his finger to and gets a phone and called for Coop.. When she talked about that he has to take it a secret where she is and ask him to go and get Henry she goes to her room and when she looks around. She sees Henry coming in.. Looks at her and sees a fake smile on her face..

Henry: So what is really wrong with you?
Paige: it's just.. Prue is back now and they now only care about her.. Like i'm not even there..
Henry: What? Since when?
Paige: Since 2 weeks..

She gets a little tears.. sits down on the bed. Henry walks to her and goes sitting next to her and takes her in his arm..

At The Manor:

Piper: What the hell happend here?
Prue: i have NO idea..
Piper: Okay well then who does because she's very pissed of right now!
Prue: I know..

Phoebe walks in looks at Piper and then to Prue..

Phoebe: Why do i get the idea my day is gonna be a nightmare?
Prue: I have no idea what your talking about.
Phoebe: Why did Paige run out of the house?
Piper: I don't know.. She looked at me and then to Prue and when Prue walked to her she ran away out of the house with only a few words and a very pissed off face!..
Phoebe: So she is away.. Out of the house..? Where is she then?
Piper: I don't know. Prue can you sence her?
Prue: i don't know.. if i can do that...
Piper: You can always try to do it.. right..

[Simymonna ( ADMIN )]

It's 2 o 'clock and Maddy is finished with school. She walks out of the hallway through the door. Then she sees a big group waiting for her after the wall. She walks to the end of square. She looks behind her and when she turns back everybody stand before her nouse!

Klarissa: Are you going somewhere?
Maddy: Not that i have to tell you about.

And she try's to walk trough the people.. But they kick her in her stomach and she falls on the ground

Klarissa: Your not going away! Were not finished with you!
Maddy: let me go!!!
Klarissa: Get her!

And 2 other girls take Maddy by her hands..

Maddy: let me go you..!!!!!!!
Klarissa: No why would we?
Maddy: LET ME GO!!!!!

Maddy gets very angry and feels her power boiling in her body! But she try's to push it away.

Klarissa: So now You Need to kiss my shoe!!
NOW!!
Maddy: No i wont!
Klarissa: DO IT or ELSE!!!!!!!!!!

And on of the girls who is standing beside Klarissa kicks Maddy in het stomach! Blood is coming out of her mouth and her noise.

Maddy: No!! I won't!! Die you B**ch!!!!!

She try's to stop it from happening.

A little bit furter in the street. Paige and Henry are walking and hearing the voices! They both walk to it and see a group of 40 people standing there. Then Paige sees Maddy there on the ground and with a lot of blood on the ground. She runs to the group but Henry tries to stop her from doing that but can't stop her because she pulls herself out of his grip. Then paige puches trough the group and looks at Klarrisa!

Paige: What was that all about?

Klarissa looks very strange to Paige that just arrived and the girls who were holding Maddy let her go by seeing Paige.

Paige: Can you not hear me? What was that all about?
Klarissa: That is none of you business!
Paige: Oh no. I think it is! 40th against one!
Klarissa; Who do you think you are?
Paige: Well i have a name that i'm definnetly not gonna tell you and i'm older as you B**ch!

Klarissa takes a step forward!
She try's to dizz her! But then lets her middle finger seen to Paige.

Klarissa: Were going! See ya tomorrow Maddy!! Then we will finish this!!

And they all walk away. Henry then walks to Paige and Maddy. Maddy looks very scared and does not look up. She has to let down her power because it could killl Klarissa by using it!

Paige: Are you okay?
Maddy: No....

Then finally she cannot hold up her power and within 2 second a flame goes over the street from Maddy her eyes to Klarissa!

Paige: FLAMES!!

And the flames orb away! She looks around. Paige is shocked for what she has seen that happend! The flame out of her eyes! going to Klarissa within 2 seconds. But Paige was on time because the flames did not hit Klarissa. But Paige did wanted it to hit her because what Klarissa did was so NOT good!

Paige: What was that?

Maddy did not realized what she did but then she looks at Paige her face.

Maddy: You saw it did you?
Paige: Yes i did that is why i orbed it away!
Maddy: So you now think i'm a freak like they do..
Paige; No i don't think that.. I think we should go to my home. It's too far if we are gonna walk to it..

Then they walk all three of them to a wall where nobody can see them al least they think that.. And then they orb..

A teacher from behind a window saw the orb and turns around to the other teachers that are standing in the room.

Macnificend: And?
Yvonne: She definatly is a witch!
Carl: So what are we gonna do?
Yvonna: First we kill her parents then go and kill her!
Harold: And how are you gonna do that? Well how are we gonna do that?
Yvonne: Just call her parents on the phone and they will come here. Only there is one problem. She is with a charmed one.
Carl: NO WAY!!
Harold: So that is 1% that we can kill her right?
Macnificend: yeah well at least we can kill 2 of them!
Carl: Melanie is gonna be very pissed off! You know that!
Yvonne: I know she will but she just have to life with it right!


At the Manor

Paige orbs in with Maddy and Henry next to her. Piper is upstairs and Prue is in the bathroom. Phoebe is watching television.Phoebe hears the orbs and turns around.

Phoebe: Hi Prue i was just..

Then she sees Paige..

Phoebe: Oh hi Paige! Where have you been?
Paige: That is not the problem right now! This is..

And Phoebe looks aside of Paige and sees Maddy and Henry next to her. She sees the blood in the face of Maddy..

Phoebe: Okay who is she? And why has she blood on her face?
Paige: That is none of your business, okay! She needs help!
Phoebe: Okay you bring a stranger in to our house that we seriously don't know and you orb in..
Paige: Well i'm sorry that i did come to here for help. Next time i will find another place to go okay!! Since your totally obsessed with Prue these days!
Phoebe: I'm sorry okay i should not have say that..
Maddy: Paige is she your sister? Because if she is your sister then that means you have another sister right..
Phoebe: Wait.. How do you think that?
Maddy: My mom told me about 3 very powerfull witchess!
Paige: She did?
Maddy: Yes! She told me that there are 3 powerfull sister that have great power and are very powerfull and killed a lot of demons and that one of the sisters died in a battle.
Paige: Okay that's true!

Piper walks from behind of the stairs together with Prue.. they are having fun together. Then Prue and Piper see Paige talking to Phoebe and a strange girl with Henry next to Paige. Phoebe sees Prue and Piper and looks at her..

Prue: Who's she?
Paige: Oh hi Prue how was your day?
Prue: It was fine thank you Paige!

And Prue and Piper walk to Phoebe and go and stand next to her.. Maddy looks at them and sees that there is something not right with the picture she sees. Then Henry takes her hand..

Henry: Maybe we should go and clean you! Maybe you should take a shower..
Maddy: Okay..

And they walk away and Maddy looks still to Prue and walks up the stairs..

Piper: So who is she? That girl?
Paige: I found her! She had a fight with some girls from her school. 40 against 1 and she had blood everywhere on her face. When they were away after i said something they did go away. Then ehm well... There was fire coming from her eyes and then i orbed it away.
Prue: WHAT!!!!!!!
Piper: So you exposed magic!!
Paige: Well the girls from her school didn't see it!
And i think nobody else saw it......
Prue: I hope they didn't or else we will see history repeating itself!
Paige: Well i'm sorry for that okay!!!!!!!!!!

And Paige walks away upstairs!

Prue: Don't you dare!!!!!!!!!

Paige turns around and pushes up her middle finger to Prue! and then walks away upstairs!

Prue: What the hell is wrong with her?
Piper: i think i know! We are spending a lot of time with eachother. And we are leaving her behind.
Prue: And now she blames me?
Phoebe: She blames all of us.
Piper: I think that is the reason why she orbed away last time. And by looking on the face of that girl. She must be alone a lot of times.. I think she thinks Paige maybe has the same thing. But i don't blame her! That Paige is angry to us.. We should go and talk to her..
Phoebe: You really think that's a good idea?
Prue: Well at least we can say that we are sorry for what we did..
Piper: Yeah...


Upstairs

Paige is sitting on her bed when Henry walks in after he heard her talking to her sister in not a really good way..

Henry: Do they blame you?
Paige: They just... you know what i mean..
Henry: Yeah i heard everything!
Paige: Then you know what then said.
Henry: Yes.. Maddy is taking a shower and i gave her some of your old clothes that you had on when you were young..
Paige: That's okay...

Maddy walks in and looks at Paige..

Maddy: I probably should go home!
Paige: Why do you want to go home?
Maddy: i don't want to be the person that is standing in your way.. And then i mean all of you. And my mother probably would be very pissed off when i'm not at home when she comes home from work..
Paige: Okay i will bring you home after we talked okay.. about the whole part of you being a witch and knowing about us..
Maddy: Okay..



At Maddy's Parents House

Griezelda Maddy's mother is sitting in a chair when the phone rings.. Griezelda walks to the phone and picks it up..

Griezelda/b]: Maddy is that you?
Yvonne: No it's the head master of the school of Maddy. I would like to talk with you and your husband about Maddy.. If that's okay with you ofcourse
Griezelda: Is something wrong?
Yvonne: No nothing we teachers just want to talk to you and your husband okay.. Is over 10 minutes okay with you at my office at M209?
Griezelda: Okay.. See ya then bye
Yvonne: Bye

And she puts the phone down...

Yvonne: That worked acatualy as we wanted it to work. Now hide yourself and make yourself invisable.

After 10 minutes of wating Griezelda and er husband Tristan arrive. Yvonne opens the door of her office

Yvonne: Welcome.. Sit down..
Griezelds: Okay..

And they sit down..

Tristan: So tell us what is wrong with our daugther?

Then some metal things apear and make there hands and legs tight down on the chairs!

Griezelda: What the?
Yvonne: Well your here to get killed and be the prize that Melanie wants! We know you have powers Griezelda! That's why you are here! We left a note for you precious daugther at your home that only needs a picture of 2 dead parents!

Then Carl comes in and pulls out a knife and kills Tristan.

Griezelda/b]: NO!!!!!
Yvonne: Oh yes and your next!

Then Carl takes his knife and kills Griezelda.. Then Macnificent takes a Picture and brings that to the house of Maddy's Parent..

Yvonne: Bye bye!

[Es]

I'm smiling at this because your characters obviously live in the Netherlands rather than America, with the names and asking for the country code.

But the story itself is fantastic, so dramatic, so right on and so right in character! And I LOVE the idea of Maddy!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

[mummyzuan]

there should be no middle finger showing...not good for the kids to read...